Wednesday, January 20, 2010

trapped

more freedom than a serf
not in a cell
only held back
by the constraints
of society
got a few bucks,
but not enough to uproot
just waiting for a breeze
strong enough to blow me away.

1 comment:

  1. things I already want to do, use the tree, change bucks to green, enlarge it encompass the whole piece,
    or, change the serf to a prisoner, but lead into the tree with light, or something about being outside. this was literally just me sitting here for 5 minutes though, so I would also just like to add to it.

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