contagiously spreading
through the body
the eyes are struck next
slowly drawn down
the shades covering daylight
malaise sets in,
the body sinking further
towards anything soft
little inaccuracies
in perception
start to pile on
little missteps
becoming bigger, eventually
leading the way

man ... I am torn on the concept Ive started. I want to go back and edit things, but the thought of editing does not inspire me to go to the website. so I come here to write something new and realize I have other things to edit.
ReplyDeleteAlso, the idea of putting things out there faster is good because it doesnt leave me with a backlog of things sitting on the burner, but at the same time my past few pieces have wanted to branch into mulptiple parts, and the editing process and going back over things needs to be there otherwise it will remain a stream of unfiltered nonsense. ...
I suppose Ill just need to make more of an effort